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Chapter 1
 You were babysitting your little brother for the weekend while your parents were on a second honeymoon. You see your little brother in the living room playing videogames. But he was playing in multiplayer, the other control was next to him. "Kenny... were you waiting for me to play with you?"- you wondered.  He looked at you like he had seen a ghost and kept quiet for a minute. "No, (y/n). I'm playing with Laughing Jack, my new friend." You smiled at your brother. "Alright, well, Dinner's ready. Wash your hands, Kenny" "Can Laughing Jack can have dinner with us?"- he asked very happy. You stopped for a moment. "Well... Laughing Jack is your friend, right? So to let him know my hospitality and know that I'm the best sister you have. How about he stay with us for the weekend?" "Really?! You really mean it?" "But of course! Now, this'll be our little secret. Pinky promise?" "Pinky promise" "Alright! Wash your hands. You too, Laughing Jack"- you said as you went to the kitchen.
  When you were prearing the table, you began to feel a pressure against you like somebody was hugging you. "All done!"- Kenny yelled entering to the dining room. "Oh, shi-shoot! SHOOT!"-you  gasped. "Are you ok?" "Y-yeah! I'm alright. Eat your dinner" "You're not eating?"- Kenny wondered. " Um.. I'm not hungry right now. I'll eat later"-you smiled at him. "Laughing Jack said that your cooking is better than mommy's" "Well, I learn some by watching tv"- you said with a weak laughter. "And he said that you're very pretty too" "Um... tell him that he is very sweet of him"- you blushed.
     By the time you tucked Kenny to sleep, you were talking with  your mom on the phone. "So, how's everything going over there?"- she asked. "It's ok, mom. Kenny's asleep right now. Um... hey, mom?" "Yeah, sweetie?" "Kenny have been mentioning abiut Laughing Jack" "Oh, yeah! I forgot about that! Laughing Jack is Kenny's imaginary friend. It's normal for kids at his age "- your mom explained. "Alright, mom, I gotta go. Just enjoy your honeymoon with dad" "Sure, (y/n). G'night" "Night"
~(y/n)'s P.o.V~
  Mom explained me about 'Laughing Jack'. I already understood about that. But... I'm still shaking since what happened earlier, preparing the table. Feeling a pressure against me... I couldn't move! I didn't know who  or what was doing it. I went upstairs and checked on Kenny. He was still asleep. I decided to take a nice, relaxing shower to calm my nerves down. "(y/n)..." I turn around but nothing was there.  I calmed myself down and took my shower.  Once I got out, I went to my room... jumped over my bed and fell asleep... just hoping that everything what happened today was just in my head
~Laughing Jack's P.o.V~
   Kenny introduces me to his older sister, (y/n) And well... pretty? She's the most beautiful person I've ever seen. When I saw her preparing the table, I hugged her. But, I separated from her now that my buddy, Kenny, was enterinring to the dining room. And now, I'm in her room... watching her sleep. She was just too beatiful. Her (h/l), (h/c) hair was shining with the moon's light. I sat down on the side of her bed and kept looking at her.  "I wish I could see me"- I thought. She wakes up and gasped. Her (e/c) eyes were widely open. She was awestruck. "W-who are you?"-she said nervously. I smiled- "Laughing Jack at your service" "No! No! No! You can't be Laughing Jack. You're not real! You are just an imagination of my 5-year-old little brother!" She was freaking out, tears were bursting out and flowed over her beautiful face. I didn't know what to do. So, I began to kiss her.
~(y/n)'s P.o.V~
 I see this guy in my room. He was tall and by the way he was standind he looked like he was boneless. Long, lanky arms with feathers on his shoulders... Ghost white skin... Swirly coned nose...  Long, black hair... Black lipped smile and sharp teeth. He was wearing baggy pants with stripped socks; just like his arms! Had these claws... as his fingers. But what scared me most was his eyes... they were piercing, ghostly white eyes. "Can't move!!"- I thought. And when he said that he's Laughing Jack, I started to freak the hell out of me. Then, ot of nowhere, he begun to kiss me. I felt his warm lips against mine. And, then, I passed out and I heard his voice dissappearing saying- "Sleep, my beautiful (y/n)"
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:iconyannabanana12:
YannaBanana12 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2014  Student Artist
Laughing Jack is smooth, real smooth... you made me passed out XD Anyway I love it! ^3^
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:icongothicbellydancer:
GothicBellydancer Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe Thanks~ please enjoy with the next chapters of the season~ :iconrika-plz:
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YannaBanana12 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  Student Artist
I will X3
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BanetteLover13 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014
tinytina204 Sep 21, 2014  New member
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you((this is not mine, I didn't come up with this.. I was told to only pass this along when I saw this in a comments event... ))
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Prettyblood14 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2014
... -_-
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:iconbanettelover13:
BanetteLover13 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014
Sorry. It was my first chain and I wanted to see how idiotic it was. Please accept these cookies made by Sebastian as an apology.
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:iconmaskylover9900:
maskylover9900 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014
This is soooo cute
!!
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:icongothicbellydancer:
GothicBellydancer Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks~ :iconrika-plz:
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:iconmaskylover9900:
maskylover9900 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014
No problem oh if its not too much to ask... could you make some more?? Please I really like these alot :)
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:icongothicbellydancer:
GothicBellydancer Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Chapter 14 is right now in the making~ But in the description below there are the other chapter of the fanfic~ :iconrika-plz: ^^
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Celestial-moon-fire Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014
how can he kiss her with that pointy nose? Wouldn't it like stab her in the eye?
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:iconmaskylover9900:
maskylover9900 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014
Oh yeah I never thought about that.... but yeah he would stab her.
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:iconcelestial-moon-fire:
Celestial-moon-fire Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
What a sucky romance then if she has to go to the hospital every time he kisses her xD
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:iconmaskylover9900:
maskylover9900 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
XDXD
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:iconcelestial-moon-fire:
Celestial-moon-fire Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
I just had a thought like now that I've pointed this out Laughing Jack would totally do this to people on purpose, like pecking their eyes out with his nose like a woodpecker. The more I imagine it the more disturbing and kind of like him it gets.
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:iconmaskylover9900:
maskylover9900 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
XDXD lol on LJ is a woodpecker!!!!
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:iconcelestial-moon-fire:
Celestial-moon-fire Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
If I could draw I would make that a thing 8'D
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:iconmaskylover9900:
maskylover9900 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
XDXD that would be sooooo funny!!! I can imagine that right now. Though it would be kinda hard because I dont know what 8d looks like :3 :D
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JaneTheKiller6645 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Student Digital Artist
love it!
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:icongothicbellydancer:
GothicBellydancer Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Glad you like it~ :iconrika-plz:
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PikaHolly Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
SWEET MOTHER OF ARCEUS I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING!!!!
I JUST PASSED OUT!?!?!?
AGAIN?!?!?!?!?

...DDDDAAAAYYYYYMMMMMNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!?
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:icongothicbellydancer:
GothicBellydancer Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I know~ 
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:iconpikaholly:
PikaHolly Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
...AWESOME!!! 

(DAMN IT THERE IS NO FUQQING MUSIC KEY KEY ANYWHERE ON THIS KEYBOARD...I WAS SING-SONG SINGING AWESOME!)
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:icongothicbellydancer:
GothicBellydancer Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconrika-plz:
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:iconanimelover864:
animelover864 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Cutest Thing Ever!!!
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:icongothicbellydancer:
GothicBellydancer Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks~ Glad you like it :iconrika-plz:
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:iconciel-phantomhive3:
Ciel-phantomhive3 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013
Whooooooo!
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:icongothicbellydancer:
GothicBellydancer Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Chapter 3 is now ready!
Here it is, enjoy ^^
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:icongothicbellydancer:
GothicBellydancer Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconmoesmileplz:
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:iconciel-phantomhive3:
Ciel-phantomhive3 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013
Llama Emoji 23 (Shyness) [V1] 
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:icongothicbellydancer:
GothicBellydancer Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconrika-plz:
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:iconciel-phantomhive3:
Ciel-phantomhive3 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013
You are so good at this! I wish I was as good!
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:icongothicbellydancer:
GothicBellydancer Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. And you can do, just be in your happy place with some of your fav characters and you get an idea :iconmoesmileplz:
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Ciel-phantomhive3 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
I'm starting to write a Laughing Jack x reader but I don't know how to write on deviantart. :(
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:icongothicbellydancer:
GothicBellydancer Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ok, to upload a fanfic is easy. First, you go to submit ART. Now that you're on that part you below on the bar that says "Choose file to upload" it says on the left "Select file from Sta.sh" and on the right it says "Enter text". By clicking "Enter text", you start to write your fanfic and when you finish, you picking the  category of the fanfic, you upload it and there! You have uploaded a fanfic 
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onyxrose2424 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
Moar? @.@
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:icongothicbellydancer:
GothicBellydancer Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, chapter 3 is on process. I'll tell you when is done:iconmoesmileplz:
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onyxrose2424 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
Yay :D
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:icongothicbellydancer:
GothicBellydancer Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^^ btw, love your profile pic is soo cute!  :iconomgsocuteplz:
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onyxrose2424 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
Aww thankies... i like yours too. ( has massive crush on laughing jack)
:)
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:icongothicbellydancer:
GothicBellydancer Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^^ me too (he's so freakingly hot!)
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:icononyxrose2424:
onyxrose2424 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
I know right? #swoons at the thought ofhim being real# o.e
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:icongothicbellydancer:
GothicBellydancer Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
asafadassadadaaffada *imagines him too* :iconnosebleedingplz:
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NormalIsAMyth Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013
Please write the next part. :'(
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:icongothicbellydancer:
GothicBellydancer Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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:icongothicbellydancer:
GothicBellydancer Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sure ^^
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blackstar112 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013
when is the next one?
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:icongothicbellydancer:
GothicBellydancer Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The second one is still in process
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blackstar112 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013
ok
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:icongothicbellydancer:
GothicBellydancer Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello, I have uploded the second chapter of the fanfic
Enjoy! ^^
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